Part 5. 무리한 영작 금지
I agree with this statement. -> 이 문장을 꼭 넣으라는 의미는 아님. 결론 먼저 때리기
Let me explain why I think this way.
Most of all, (이유 1) / On top of that, (이유 2)
(근거 1) - 과거 시제
From my experience, when I was in university days, ( ~ ). *과거*
For me, it was not helpful at all. *과거*
(근거 2) - 현재 시제
According to a recent news report, the majority of (CEOs, experts..) in Korea said
that ( ~ ) is very beneficial/helpful/essential/important for students.
Therefore I think this way.
Idea 줍줍 time ~
[1] 돈 없어 무새 (학생이야 돈 없어 / 비싸 돈 없어 / 낭비&살 여유없어)
The price is reasonable. (Part 3)
It's cheaper, so I can save money.
I can't afford to buy expensive things/new ones.
I don't want to waste too much money on that. I think it's a waste of money.
@학생
I'm a student so my budget is tight.
I'm a student and I don't have much money.
@직장인
They can't make a living. 먹고 살기 힘들다.
The cost of living is too high/expensive.
I can get a higher salary. / I want to get a higher salary.
That's a good investment because it makes lives better. *투자*
[2]시간 없어 무새 (학생이야 시간없어 / 시간 낭비)
It's faster, so I can save time.
I don't want to waste much time on that. I think it's a waste of time.
I'm a student and I'm busy with my schoolwork.
I'm a student and I don't have much time.
I can get information anytime anywhere on my smartphone.
[3] 시간 낭비 -> 학생 : 성적 떨어짐
They can't get good grades at school.
They will/might fall behind in class.
It was very distracting for me so I couldn't focus on my studies. *경험*
[4] 시간 낭비 -> 직장인 : 만족/효율/생산성 저하, employees
They can't work efficiently.
They can't work productively.
They can't work more efficiently and productively.
They can't be more satisfied with their job.
It was very distracting for me so I couldn't focus on my work.
[5] 꿀잼(시간 빨라, 안 지루해, 노걱정, 환경/경험, 스트레스 해소)
It's more fun and entertaining so I don't get bored.
It makes me happy so I can forget about my worries.
It makes me happy so I can relieve my stress.
ㄴ I'm stressed out these days. So I need this.
It makes me feel like time flies
It helps me relieve stress so I feel relaxed.
It's my favorite thing to do.
They provide a happy environment and a pleasant experience.
I really like/love/enjoy it.
[6] 다수 장점(즐거움, 친구, 배움, 많은 정보)
It's more fun to do things in a group.
I can meet new people and make friends.
I can meet new people and expand my network.
I can learn new things from others/them.
I can get a lot of information and share it with others.
I can get a lot of useful/latest information from other people/my friends.
I can get a lot of information from my friends so it's more reliable/trustworthy.
[4-1] 다수 단점
I always get distracted by others so I can't focus on that.
[7] 나 혼자 장점(집중O, 시간 낭비X)
I will not be distracted by others. so I can focus better.
I can set my own schedule so I can have more freedom.
I feel more comfortable so I can focus better.
I don't have to waste time waiting for other people.
I don't have to waste time socializing with other people.
I don't have to waste time going out. (to go out 미래느낌)
I can save time because I don't have to waste time going out.
[8] 온라인 장점(정보, 속도, 편리)
I can get a lot of useful information on ~
I can get a lot of latest information on ~
I can get information anytime anywhere on mobile apps using my smartphone.
It's faster and convenient.
[9] 온라인 단점 / 아날로그 장점 (즉각반응, 화자, 믿을만해)
I can get responses from my friends right away.
I can understand the feeling of the speaker more accurately.
There is a lot of inaccurate information on the internet so it's not reliable.
[9-1] 대면 장점 (ex. 온라인 강의 단점 - 오해X, 개인적, 관계형성)
It is more personal, and builds a closer relationship.
It causes less misunderstanding.
**학생 vs 직장인은 한 끗차이**
[9] 각박한 세상~ (변화, 경쟁, 어려움)
Everything is always changing and there is a lot of competition.
They face a lot of challenges and difficulties.
[10] 많은 경험 장점(견해, 배움, 핸들~, 성숙, 좋은 결정)
They can have a lot of experience so they can broaden their perspective.
I can learn new things through a lot of experience.
They can learn new things so they can have a lot of experience./knowledge.
They are able to handle a variety of situation (due to their creativity.)
They can grow up and become mature.
They will be mature grow up and be able to make good decisions in life.
[11] 좋은 경험
It makes me happy so I can have a great experience.
They provide a happy environment and pleasant experience.
[12] 사회성 강화(소통, 환경, 팀원, 관계)
They can communicate with others better.
They can be good team players and make good relationships with others.
They can make a friendly (work) atmosphere. -> 분위기 환경
It can make a better work environment. -> 시설 환경
[12] 인성 / 리더 / 능력 (평판, 영향력, 동기부여)
They can have a good reputation.
They can be very influential.
They can motivate others.
[13] 기업 성공
Customers will feel satisfied and remain loyal.
It will atrract more customers.
The business will be more successful.
[14] 환경
Pollution is a serious issue these days.
It is good for the environment.
We will be able to protect the environment.
It can make a cleaner environment.
[15] 습관 / 필요
It's my habbit.
It's part of my daily routine.
I frequently use it.
It's very necessary for me.
They are too old so I think it's good to have new ones. (오래됨)
They are too outdated so I think it's good to have new ones. (구식)
If we have more stores here, it would be more convenient.
If they offer mobile apps, they will be more popular.
[16] 인기짱
It's a popular item so people love it.
It's a well-liked place so people love it.
It has great facilities.
[17] 추천
It's more reliable and I can trust the product.
[14] 아묻따 좋아
I really like/love/enjoy it.
ㄴ I really like to play games in my free time.
I like to try new things.
It was great / awesome
It's very helpful/benefitial/essential for me.
It's very important to me.
It's my favorite thing to do.
It's a good gift.