Part 5. 무리한 영작 금지
I agree with this statement. -> 이 문장을 꼭 넣으라는 의미는 아님. 결론 먼저 때리기
Let me explain why I think this way.
Most of all, (이유 1) / On top of that, (이유 2)
(근거 1) - 과거 시제
From my experience, when I was in high school days, ( ~ ). *과거* I used to work at a company.
For me, it was not helpful at all because ( S + V ). *과거*
(근거 2) - 현재 시제
According to a recent news report, the majority of (CEOs, experts..) in Korea said that
( S + V ) is very beneficial/helpful/essential/important for students.
Therefore I think this way.
#0. Practice
Some people say having a job that you like is more likely to earn you more money.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Why or why not?
@IDEA
이유 1 : 더 효율적이고 생산적으로 일할 수 있다. Employees can work more efficiently and productively.
이유 2 : 직업 만족도가 높아 더 많이 벌 수 있다. (더 열심히 일한다.) Employees can be more satisfied with their jobs.
@예시
(1) I agree with this statement.
(2) Let me explain why I think this way.
(3) Most of all, people can work more efficiently and productively if they have a job that they like. (고득점)
(4) From my experience, I used to work at a company, I really liked my job. (즉석 영작 문장은 매우 쉽게!)
(5) For me, it was helpful because I was able to work/worked more efficiently and productively (and earn(was able to earn) more money.)
(6) On top of that, people can be more satisfied with their jobs (and earn more money) (if they have a job that they like.)
(7) According to a recent news report, the majority of office workers in Korea said that
having a job that they like is very beneficial (because they can be more satisfied with their jobs and work harder.)
having a job that you(they) like is more likely to earn you(them) more money (because you(they) can be more satisfied with your(their) jobs and work harder.)
(8) Therefore, I agree with this statement.(서론문장 반복)
@답변
I agree with this statement.
Let me explain why I think this way.
Most of all, people can work more efficiently and productively if they have a job that they Iike.
From my experience, I used to work at a company, I really liked my job.
For me, it was very helpful because I was able to work efficiently and productively and earn more money.
On top of that, people can be more satisfied with their job if they have a job that they like.
According to a recent news report, the majority of office workers in Korea said that having a job that they like is very beneficial because they can be more satisfied with their jobs and work harder.
Therefore I agree with this statement.
#1. When you work at a company as a new employee, which one do you think is the best option for you?
- a bonus
- a long vacation
- flexible working hours
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinions.
@답변
I think receiving a bonus is the best option when I work at a company.
Let me explain why I think this way.
Most of all, I can save much money if I receive a bonus.
From my experience, I used to work at a company, the cost of living was too high.
For me, it was helpful because I got a higher salary and was able to save much money when I received a bonus.
On top of that, I can be more satisfied with my job if I receive a bonus from my company.
According to a recent news report, the majority of office workers in Korea said that
receiving a bonus is very beneficial/the best option when they choose the company
because they can be more satisfied with their jobs and remain/stay loyal to their company.
Therefore, receiving a bonus is the best option while working at a company.
#2. Do you think high school students should have organizational skills to do well at school? Why?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinions. (올가니제이셔널)
@답변
I think high school students should have organizational skills to do well at school.
Let me explain why I think this way.
Most of all, students can manage their time effectively if they have organizational skills to do well at school.
From my experience when I was in high school days I learned about organizational skills at school.
For me, it was very helpful because I was able to manage my time effectively and save much time.
On top of that, students can be more mature if they have organizational skills.
According to a recent news report, the majority of education experts in Korea said that
having organizational skills is very beneficial because students can grow and become mature.
Therefore, high school students should have organizational skills at school.
#3. What are some disadvantages of getting world news on the Internet rather than in newspapers?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinions.
@답변
Getting world news on the internet is
Most of all, there is a lot of inaccurate information on the internet so it's not reliable.
From my experience, when I was in high school, I didn't like getting world news on the internet.
For me, it was not helpful at all because I got inaccurate information about my schoolwork so I got C grades at school.
On top of that, there is more t
@답변
Most of all, there is a lot of inaccurate information on the Internet so it's not reliable.
From my experience, when I used to work at a company, I wanted to find the latest information about my work.
However the information I found on the Internet was not useful for me.
According to a recent news report, the majority of researchers in Korea said that
reading newspapers is more helpful than reading news on the Internet. Therefore I think this way.
#4. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement :
Participating in an international internship is the best way to improve one's work performance.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinions.
@답변
I agree with this statement.
Let me explain why I think this way.
Most of all, people can meet new people from all over the world if they participate in an international internship.
From my experience, when I was in university, I participated in an international internship.
For me, it was very helpful because I was able to meet a variety of people through an internship so I was able to improve my work performance by communicating with them.
On top of that, people can expand their networks and get a lot of advice if they participate in an international internship.
According to a recent news report, the majority of successful CEOs in Korea said that
participating in an international internship is the best way to improve their work performance because they get a lot of advice from their wide networks.
Therefore, participating in an international internship is the best way to improve work performance.
@답변
I agree with this statement. Let me explain why I think this way.
Most of all, if they participate in an international internship, they can meet new people from all over the world.
On top of that, they can broaden their perspective and expand their networks.
From my experience, when I was in university days, I participated in an international internship.
It was very helpful for me because I was able to get a lot of experience.
According to a recent news report, the majority of successful CEOs in Korea said that they prefer employees with international internship experiences. Therefore I think this way.
@수정
I agree with this statement. Let me explain why I think this way.
Most of all, they can meet new people from all over the world and expand their networks if they participate in an international internship.
From my experience, when I was in university days, I participated in an international internship.
It was very helpful for me because I had a lot of experience handling a variety of situations.
On top of that, they can broaden their perspectives if they participate in an international internship.
According to a recent news report, the majority of workers in Korea said that they prefer employees with international internship experience. Therefore I think this way.
#5. Do you prefer to work alone in a private office or with your colleagues(컬리ㄱ) in a shared office when you work at a company?
Use specific reasons and examples to supprot your opinions.
@답변
I prefer to work with my colleagues in a shared office when I work at a company. Let me explain why I think this way.
Most of all, I can get a lot of useful information about my work and share it with my colleagues.
From my experience, when I used to work at a company, I worked with my colleagues.
It was helpful for me because I made good decisions by getting their advice. (복수 절대 안됨)
According to a recent news report, the majority of workers in Korea said that it's very benefitial to communicate with others because they can work more effectively and productively. Therefore I think this way.
#6. Do you think watching TV programs is a better way to get expert knowledge in one's field rather than reading books?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opininons.
@답변
I don't think watching TV programs is a better way to get expert knowledge.
Let me explain why I think this way.
Most of all, there is a lot of inaccurate information on TV programs so they are not reliable.
From my experience, when I was in high school days, I had been watching TV to get expert knowledge.
But it was not useful because the speaker was not expert in one's field.
According to a recent news report, the majority of researchers in Korea said that r]eading books is the best way to get knowledge. Therefore I think this way.
#7. Which of the following influences your decision most when you choose a new laptop computer to buy?
- customer reviews
- advertisements
- advice from sales representatives
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinions.
Can: 능력, 허락 (현재) - only 현재, 높은 가능성
Could: 과거 능력, 현재 가능성, 정중한 요청 - 현재/미래/과거, 높은 가능성
May: 허락, 미래 가능성 - 현재/미래
Might: 낮은 가능성, 과거 추측 (더 불확실) - 현재/미래/과거, 낮은 가능성
Would: 가정적 상황, 정중한 요청 - only 미래